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You are an exchange student Jenny.You want to recommend Bob to be your new monitor. Fill in the blanks first. Then write a letter to your class teacher. Use adj. and adv. more. (About 80 words)

本期的两篇文章是命题作文，属于提建议的类型。同学们可以和这期专题的两篇议论文对比一下。专题的文章是阐述为何喜欢足球，而这两篇是阐述为何推荐某人为班长。

Dear teacher,

I want to recommend Bob to be our new monitor.

It is clear that he has a lot of strong qualities for this position.

First of all, he is such a helpful person that he is ready to give a helping hand any time .If we have any trouble, he will listen to us carefully and then offer us useful advice.

Besides, we all think him smart. He is able to solve difficult problems easily. It is quite simple for him to achieve a balance between his hobby and his schoolwork.

Moreover, he is con fident. He believes that he can do almost anything if he tries his best. Also, he does things carefully and never forgets the things he needs to do.

In my opinion, nobody else is more suitable than him. We hope that you can agree with me.

Yours,

Jenny

南京市浦口区行知中学 九年级（一）班 朱瑞阳

李维玉老师点评：

本文主旨明确，思路清晰，正确运用语法句法，形容词和副词使用得当，多处使用了关系连词，文章衔接自然。

Dear teacher,

I want to recommend Bob to be our new monitor. Bob, the most helpful student in our class, is the person who can be a good monitor. He is ready to offer us help any time. Also, it is quite organized of him to keep all his

things in good order.

Morever, Bob is such a clever boy that he can work out all the maths questions which we don’t understand. He always does his homework carefully and all the teachers think highly of him.

In my opinion, Bob is the most suitable boy to be our monitor.Do you think so?

I hope my advice is worth taking.

Yours,

Jenny

南京市浦口区行知中学 九年级（一）班 吴蕊

李维玉老师点评：

文章结构清楚，正确运用形容词和副词及其多种形式，宾语从句和定语从句，为文章锦上添花。