I Like Parrots

Which animal do you like best？

My answer is the parrot.

I raise（饲养） a parrot named Polly.

He has a blue body with a grey head and a grey tail.

His feathers are soft and smooth.

He is so friendly that he loves to play with us.

江蘇省南京市琅琊路小学四（2）班 朱泰然

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学生在描写动物时能从多角度切入，介绍动物的外貌、行为、饮食、性格等，多样化的句式使得文章生动有趣；描写水果时，与季节巧妙结合，形象的比喻和真切的感受让读者感同身受。