The Cute Chicks

My grandma has a hen.

The hen has seven little chicks.

Some are yellow and some are black.

They stay in a box.

The mother hen loves her seven babies.

I like these little chicks.

I hope they can grow up soon.

江蘇省锡山高级中学实验学校第二小学三（14）班 陶钰萱

指导老师 丁小林

孩子们构思巧妙，善于抓住小动物的主要特点，进而展开和小动物之间的故事描写。小作者对动物的喜爱之情跃然纸上，语言天真，富有童趣。